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PostSubject: Moonlight   Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:48 pm

So this is just a little piece from a story I have been writing called Moonlight:


She was staring at the face of an angel. Chocolate hair in a perfect disarray framed his pale face. Full lips twitched up into a smile so beautiful that it hurt and his warm brown eyes were scorching as he looked up at her. Her. And she was staring at him like an idiot. A scarlet flush rushed to her cheeks and she quickly looked away.

"Hey." A voice called.

She looked up. It was him, the new guy and his voice was just as beautiful as he was, if not more. Flowing effortlessly, it filled the air around her with its soft tone.

"Hi." She muttered, embarrassed. She was flushing an even deeper red than before and she quickly walked away as to not make even more of a fool of herself.


Jace was outside waiting for her by the stoplight where they usually met. She came up next to him and smiled briefly. He returned the smile and put an arm around her and whispered in her ear. "Did you hear about the new kid? Michael?"

"Yeah."

"I want you to stay away from him."

"What? Why?" she was confused, besides being inhumanly beautiful he had seemed human enough. Gemma pulled away to look at Jace. He too was breathtakingly beautiful. With his blonde hair, hazel eyes, with his strong arms and unmistakable grace. Jace had warmth to him, as if he was made of sunshine. And he was, at least that was what the legend said. It reminded her of the new kid, Michael. Except Michael was darker, more mischievous. As if he was made out of the night instead."Is he, you know?" she asked hesitantly.

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PostSubject: Re: Moonlight   Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:52 pm

oh my god.

seriously, how do you do it? your writing is amazing!
I think I am going to take my piece of crap off


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or else I will stab you with my fork of death *whips out fork*
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PostSubject: Re: Moonlight   Sun May 25, 2008 9:40 pm

This is really good writing! I am intrigued by the story!! It is really good!! I want to read more!!

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Seriously this is really good!!
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PostSubject: Re: Moonlight   Thu Jun 12, 2008 6:16 pm

oh thank you!
i have had writer's block lately so progress on this story has been slow. but as soon as i write something decent, i will most likely add it to the story.

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