I'm sorry if you don't want me to respond, but... you can't only give me that much!! That small segment opened so many possibilities. You could do so much with that! Honestly that was good!! I would read that book, it sounds really awesome. And not only was the story good, from what I could tell, but the writing was good too!! You should really post some more. I would love to read it. I am an aspiring editor and I have to write before I can really become an editor and that was good! I would never have the guts to post my writing!! It truley was good!! Post more!!